It was good except for one thing...you need a preloader. It helps people (like me) who have a slow computer know that the video/game is loading so they just don't leave the video/game and actually watch it. Other than that it was good.
There is a preloader... I've used the same one on my VR music video and my BSF RPG (check other submissions from me for those).
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